S0 E5: In Due Time…

The Chaos Project is finally back in action! The Fifth episode of the Speed of Time arc can be read right here!

Things seem to be going well for the hedgehogs as they continue their mission. But in travelling near to their own times, Sonic and Silver must each face a personal problem that they could never have expected. Will Silver really have to destroy the Chaos Emeralds? Why is Sonic such a fool? And who can finally snap him out of it?

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Review: Cast by the Light Finale

Like the episode release itself, this post details both Part 10 and the Epilogue. Starting with the beginning, I warped time a little bit to have Shadow not finish his boss fight until after the next cutscene had started, just a little creative liberty to improve the story’s flow. Next, the Final Hazard fight was fairly standard, though I did have a lot of fun picking and choosing between the large number of random lines shouted at you throughout the original fight, and stringing them together in ways which seemed to show progression that didn’t originally exist. It is notable that Sonic’s line to Shadow after the fight “at this rate your Super Form won’t last,” was supposed to be said during the fight if you start to run out of rings as Shadow. I moved it over to help convey the same sense of drama at a more appropriate time. Also added to that scene was the flashback describing Shadow’s Inhibitor Rings. What those rings are supposed to be is never once mentioned in the original game, and Shadow isn’t even seen removing them, despite the fact that Sonic is holding one of them later. However, I believe it was Sonic 06 that first canonized them as specifically being Inhibitor Rings, in the final cutscene of his story after the fight with Mephiles. Anyways, I felt it very much needed to be retroactively added. The last change in that scene was an added event in which Sonic grudgingly chooses not to save Shadow. In the original, the possibility of Shadow’s being rescued is not even considered, despite the fact that there’s no specific reason why Sonic can’t have gone after him.

Next is the change that came to what was originally the credits sequence. Particularly the discussion between Tails and Eggman. In the original, Tails shouted, at random, in an almost creepy manner, “We all did it together!” He’s quite famous for that line, actually. That’s why I saw it as particularly necessary to fix. First, I changed his attitude and mannerisms in saying it, though I didn’t remove or change any of the specific words said. I had it suggested that Tails is uncomfortable with the subject of idolized figures not turning out to be what they seem, explaining why he so dramatically changed the subject. Why he would have such discomfort is something that will be explored later in The Chaos Project. Anyways, perhaps that change alone might have been enough, but I took it a step further. I had Tails continue to speak, in way which ties his original statement back into the original subject, despite his discomfort. “Together” matters because it means that Eggman doesn’t need to concern himself with the grandfather that he has surpassed through teamwork. And that’s all for Part 10!

As for the Epilogue, there’s not a whole lot to say for such a short scene. It was actually quite interesting writing for it, since characters in Sonic Heroes are a lot more active and expressive than they were in Sonic Adventure 2, making the whole sequence take a lot longer to describe than it would have if the scene were made for an older game. Even in the middle of dialogue, each character would be behaving in their own way, making it difficult to get all of the timing right. But I enjoyed the change of pace. There were a few liberties taken with how long it takes for Shadow to be fully revealed, since it wasn’t kept much of a secret in the original (seeing as you’ve already chosen him on the character select screen by the time the scene starts). Lastly, I added a line to Rouge’s reconciliation at the end, detailing her own motivations which I felt were missing when defining those of the other two. And that’s all! Cast by the Light is officially finished!

– So until next time, remember to live and learn every day! And while you’re at it, don’t forget to set the stage for a heroes parade!

Cast by the Light: Finale

Funny story. In all the stress of wrapping up a story, I forgot to post about it here! But the final two chapters of Cast by the Light have been up and running for some time now, Part 10: Live and Learn and the Epilogue: This Machine.

Can you feel life, movin’ through your mind…?” Shadow certainly could, as his entire life led up to his confrontation with his own prototype. Can Sonic and Shadow work together and save the planet? Will Shadow at last fulfill his promise? Or will he die, trying?

“We all danced in fire, looking through the screen…” The final battle is long over. And Rouge has moved on with her life. But looking for treasure, she finds something else instead. Something she never could have expected.

Review: Cast by the Light Part 9

Originally, I was planning on releasing parts 9 and 10 together, but I realized that I needed a little more time to work on the Chaos Project. Instead, I wrote an Epilogue that I will be releasing alongside part 10. Anyways, the first change in this episode came in the very beginning. As Eggman becomes concerned with with the ARK’s falling, I felt the need to make sure it was specified that the Cannon’s exploding and the ARK’s falling were not related incidents. Otherwise, Sonic would be responsible for nearly destroying the entire planet. That would have been bad. The next change came with Eggman’s explanation of the imminent danger. I don’t remember exactly what the original said, but I remember feeling that there theoretically wouldn’t be as much of a problem with what he was explaining as what the rest of the dialogue in the game ends up suggesting.

There is one creative liberty I took, seeing as this is a story instead of a game. In the previous scene, it was inferred that the game cut to the level just before Eggman began explaining the plan. Instead of having him explain it again over the radio, I had each character’s instructions explained through a flashback that occurred as they were going through the stage, which obviously wouldn’t have been possible in the real game. Another small change came in the form of Eggman and Tails’ goal in getting to the Cannon’s Core. Originally, their target was to destroy two security doors. For what I hope are obvious reasons, that makes no sense. Maybe one door would make sense, since they need an entrance in the first place. But after this, everyone ends up going through the same place, making a second door a complete waste of time and effort. Instead, I had security locks described, machines which prevent access through the single necessary entrance to the liquid-flooded area. Lastly, I modified Amy’s friendship speech to Shadow slightly, since I felt the original “they’re basically good” line was a little bit too awkward. And that’s all for now. Coming next is the most fun I’ve ever had writing for a fight scene!

– Until then, remember to live and learn every day!
(Apparently, I can’t align text to the right anymore, so this little outro doesn’t look as pretty. Oh, well.)

Cast by the Light Part 9: Supporting Me

The action continues to rise in this newest part of Cast by the Light.

“I’m gonna be desperate… I’ll be losing you before long…” And this desperation could not be more true, as the explosive space colony hurdles towards the surface of the planet below, spelling the end of all life. The only way to save the planet is for Sonic, Tails Knuckles, Eggman, Rouge, and Shadow to all bind together in one final effort to stop the colony before it’s too late. But will Shadow really cooperate? Perhaps he wouldn’t, if he knew he were speeding towards his own demise…

Review: Cast by the Light Part 8

This is where the story actually got quite difficult. At this point, the Hero story and Dark story start to contradict each other. Before, there had been minor differences such as those about who won certain fights, but then they each had the same cutscene afterwards anyways, so it was easily fixable. But much larger difference started to show up here, which you almost wouldn’t notice playing the game casually. For example, in the Dark story, Eggman defeats Tails, takes the Emerald, and tells Shadow to deal with Sonic. But in the hero story, Sonic makes it back to the ARK, defeats Shadow, puts the fake Emerald into the Cannon, and makes it back to the outside of the Research Lab just as Tails defeats Eggman. Time wise, it just doesn’t match up. Then, of course, there’s the problem of which Emerald actually makes it into the Cannon (which will be given an in-universe explanation in the next part). In the Dark story, the Cannon doesn’t explode, it just fails to fire and then the colony starts falling. In all technicality, the Dark story actually makes more sense to be what really happened, since the Cannon is in working order and is fired in Shadow the Hedgehog. Problem is, that would make for a terrible story if Tails failed to beat Eggman and then Eggman accomplished exactly what he set out to do. So, Tails beat Eggman, but Eggman still stole what he thought was the real Emerald, which, in the only explanation I could come up with, Sonic used Chaos Control to swap with the real one (and I had to add a few seconds to the timestamp to allow Sonic time to do this in a scene that didn’t exist in the original). Sonic never actually went back to the Cannon himself, allowing the timelines to line up a bit better. The only change left was to have Eggman tell Shadow to deal with Sonic during his fight with Tails instead of after.

As for other changes, the first major one was to add a thought to Shadow’s meeting with Sonic after believing him to be dead. In the original, Shadow first says that he believes Sonic’s Emerald is real, but then almost immediately turns around and accuses that Sonic can’t possibly have used a fake to do what he did. So, I felt it necessary to add a thought in which Shadow specifically realizes that the Emerald isn’t real like he thought it was, allowing for a more smooth, entire thought process to be expressed. Lastly, after Shadow’s statement upon being defeated, I added one last thought, suggesting that Shadow was, at some point, informed by the Professor about a being equal in strength to his own, able to use Chaos Control. This was a lead-in to the Chaos Project, in which I will be exploring the many memories which Shadow has still failed to recall in the present. And that will be all until next time, a special double episode for the Final Story, in which Sonic Adventure 2 reaches its final climax.

– Until then, remember to live and learn every day!

Cast by the Light Part 8: For True Story

A little late again, the conclusion to the Hero and Dark stories is here at last.

Read it right here!

“Stars don’t twinkle, the moon doesn’t shine…” And the moon certainly can’t shine, now that half of it has been blown out of the sky. And up on the ARK, high in space, stars certainly don’t twinkle. Perhaps Shadow thinks of this as some metaphor for his own life as he begins the final conflict with his rival, while Tails and Eggman duel over the fate of Sonic, Amy, the final Chaos Emerald, and the world.

Review: Cast by the Light Parts 6 and 7

Another combination review for lack of content. In fact, Part 6 has almost nothing. Just the note that I added a little bit to either side of the scene where Knuckles opens the door, the later end of which because, as I mentioned in an earlier review, they don’t like showing people actually opening doors for some reason. As for the beginning of the scene, I just wanted to clearly demonstrate that Knuckles did beat King Boom Boo, without actually describing the reality-screwing physics of that fight. And that’s all for that! As for part 7, there was a little bit of dialogue right at the beginning I felt the need to alter. Even though Sonic, Tails, and Amy had clearly been walking through the ARK for quite some time since landing, and Knuckles had every reason to have separated from them immediately upon landing (if not sooner), the original script had Sonic behave as if he were only just realizing that Knuckles was no longer with them. Not only that, but Sonic had only just been talking as if Knuckles clearly weren’t there (at least, I assume he wouldn’t insult Knuckles in the third-person if he were standing right there). So altered it just a bit to convey more the sense that Sonic had been ranting about Knuckles ever since he left, and only just then got to the question of where he actually went. Besides that, I added a few thoughts and flashbacks for Sonic throughout the part. And that’s all!

– So until next time, remember to live and learn every day!

Cat by the Light Part 7: E.G.G.M.A.N.

The plot thickens with this newest episode!

Here it is!

“I am the Eggman, with the master plan…” And as his plan continues to unfold, Sonic and friends realize they could be in the greatest danger they’ve ever faced. Will Sonic survive his trip to the ARK, and save the kidnapped Amy?